FanFic - Crashdown After Hours
"Sense of Completion"
Part 9
by Linda
Disclaimer: Roswell, the characters, and situations are owned by the WB. No infringement intended.
Category: After Hours
Rating: NC-17
Liz laughed realizing they hadn’t even greeted each other yet today.

“Good morning Max.” Liz whispered against Max’s hot, wet lips.

Max brushed his lips against hers in return and then teased her mouth open and slid his tongue into her waiting sweet heat. He loved the flavor of Liz, chocolate and Tabasco sauce.

He slowly moved in and out, getting them into a rhythm. He loved loving her. Neither one of them had any control around the other, and he hoped it was always like this.

Liz pulled him closer and ran her hands up under his shirt so she could touch his smooth, muscular back. She loved touching Max. Everywhere and all the time. She couldn’t get enough of him. Liz loved the fullness when Max was a part of her. She didn’t know when she ended and he began she just felt complete.

Liz’s inner walls clenched tight around Max as she neared her release. She felt Max slide a hand between their hot bodies and find her swollen nub. He was as familiar with her body as he was with his own now, but was still amazed by hers. She drove him crazy with equal portions of love and lust.

When his fingers made contact with her sensitive nub, Liz arched closer and Max’s tongue went deeper into her mouth, and his body picked up a faster pace.

“Oh God Max! Yes! Don’t stop! Max…I’m going to fall, hold me!” Liz whispered and nibbled on his mouth as he came up for air.

“I’ve got you Liz…Oh Babe… you feel so good! Liz!! I’m gonna explode.” He admitted and gritted his teeth and rubbed her all the more, wanting her to be with him. Liz drove him mad. Then he had another thought. This was his Liz and she was pregnant with his child. This thought alone drove him over the edge. When he felt her inner muscles clench around him and pull him further into her, he captured her mouth under his again to keep her from crying out. Then he put his hands on either side her hips and drove into her wildly, knowing she was with him. She was always with him. When they both tumbled over the edge together, Max cried out into Liz’s mouth as well.

Max couldn’t stop. He kept pouring his love into her and even Liz was surprised at how much control Max had lost.

She held onto him tight and kept squeezing and milking the rest of him to completion. She kissed his neck and shoulders and his chest where she had gotten a few buttons open, and just soothed him as he continued to lose control.

When Max finally stopped moving and collapsed against Liz, burying his head in her neck, Liz soothed his wet hair away from his face, kissed his forehead and whispered her love.

When Max was finally able to breathe normally again, and looked up at her with an amazed smile, Liz laughed lightly.

“Well, if I wasn’t already carrying your baby, I would be after that.” She teased and laughed harder when Max actually turned red.

Liz wrapped her arms around Max harder and hugged him closer. God how she loved him!

“I don’t know why this keeps getting locked! When people are done, they should unlock it!” they heard the janitor say, as the key rattled in the lock.

Max quickly slid out of Liz, pushed down her skirt, and turned with his back to the door as he quickly pulled his pants back up and zipped them.

The door opened as Max was zipping up, and he heard Liz gasp. Max turned back around and saw that it was the janitor and the principal, and swore softly.

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Liz and Max sat in the outer office of the principal’s office as the principal talked to their parents in his office.

Liz shifted on the seat, then froze and couldn’t help but giggle.

Max looked at her like she was crazy to find anything funny right now, but Liz whispered in his ear, and Max turned red and then couldn’t help but chuckle too. He put his hand in his pocket and sure enough, her panties were still there.

Liz was blushing, and laughing, and tried to stop both as the door to the principal’s office opened and Liz’s dad, Max’s mom and the principal came into the outer room.

“Liz, honey, is this true?” her dad looked surprised and a little shocked. Not his baby girl!

Liz looked from her dad to Max’s mom and saw a little bit of a warming in Max’s mom’s eyes.

Diane and Liz had gotten closer while Max had been on the run, and Diane seemed to have accepted a while ago that Max loved this girl and that this was something special between them. For Max had never given her any reason to have to come to school for any reason before, especially for this! She knew that Max was drawn to Liz and that she was drawn to him as well. She sighed, knowing she was still going to have to talk to Max about being careful.

“Dad, is what true? That we were kissing? A lot of people use the eraser room to sneak a kiss, I’m not a little girl anymore.” Liz said quietly.

“A Kiss?” the principal asked with a raised eyebrow.

Both parents looked from the Principal to their teens.

Max and Liz tried not to blush under the intense scrutiny, but both of them were red faced at being caught by the principal.

And Max was equally embarrassed knowing it was Liz’s dad he was confronting. He tried to put himself in Mr. Parker’s place and it wasn’t too difficult, knowing he would have a baby of his own soon, and how he would feel. But Max loved Liz. He wanted to marry her now, but knew they couldn’t. And he wanted to be honest and tell the world that she was his, and that she was already carrying his child, but he couldn’t do that either. His jaw tightened as he held back all he wanted to declare.

“Liz, honey, I know you and Max are…taken with each other, but to be so irresponsible…” Liz’s dad was at a loss for words. He didn’t know how to handle this. He had never had any trouble with his daughter before. She was always such a good, sweet girl. She was so bright and driven to accomplish so much.

Then he met Max’s eyes and saw that teen’s eyes didn’t waver, instead, they met his honestly and straightforwardly. But he could tell that Max was upset about the whole situation. He really liked Max, but was still reeling from finding out that his daughter had been caught making out heavily, according to the principal, when they’d been found.

“Well I assure you Mr. Von, this will not happen again. Right Liz?” Her dad stressed meeting her eyes pointedly. He would talk to her later. Then he looked again at Max to get him to agree as well. And saw the boy nod as well.

Liz nodded. She just wanted to agree to anything to get them away from this scene.

“Max?” Diane Evans directed towards him. She would need to talk to him later as well. She loved Liz and was thrilled that she had made such a difference in her son’s life. Max was so much happier and open and carefree. She knew that Liz was good for Max, but didn’t want to let them think she approved of what they had been doing.

Max nodded as well. “Yeah.” he said taking a deep breath and sliding his hands in his pockets, only to freeze again, and then, bite his lip to keep from grinning when he came in contact with Liz’s panties again.

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“I knew you two would get in trouble one of these times!” Isabel rolled her eyes and grinned at Max and Liz.

They were all seated around the picnic table at lunch. Liz was sitting on Max’s lap, despite what had happened earlier. Isabel and Alex were across from them, and Maria was leaning back against Michael as he faced her on the bench.

Maria laughed but then sobered. “Honestly, what are you going to do if your parents tell you two you can’t see each other?”

Max frowned, but Liz shook her head. “It won’t happen,” she said positively.

“Oh? I’ve seen your mom when she’s upset Liz.” Maria reminded her.

“We’ll be more careful.” Liz just said.

“Oh, you mean Max won’t crawl into your window every night to sleep with you anymore?” Michael teased.

Alex shorted a laugh and Max and Liz tossed first Michael, and then Alex a frown.

Their friends were really having fun at their expense, Max thought. But he knew that nothing would keep him from Liz. Even though he couldn’t announce it to the world, Liz was his.

She turned and met his eyes, hers understanding. He knew she had read his mind just then and that she too wouldn’t let anything come between them.

“What about your symptoms Liz? Have your parents said anything? Been suspicious at all?” Isabel asked.

Liz shook her head. “I’ve been pretty much able to keep it from them. They don’t know anything.”

“That you know of. I mean we don’t know what symptoms you might have next. Even Jordan didn’t know what to expect, as all pregnancies are different.” Michael added.

“Well you better not touch someone who’s bleeding.” Isabel said, tongue in cheek, and then winked.

“Or go without your chocolate Milk.” Alex winked.

“Or let them see your increased appetite.” Maria teased with a laugh.

Liz smiled slowly and looked down as she played with Max’s fingers.

“Well, it’s a good thing we’re going to go see Jordan this weekend.” Max said hugging Liz tighter to him.

They all agreed there. The trio needed to know more about who and what they were. There was still so much they didn’t know. ******************

Tina Owens’ eyes glittered with rage as she watched that Parker girl throw herself all over Max. Boy was she desperate or what. She thought.

“I thought you said as soon as you wanted him he’d be yours? He looks pretty taken by Liz Parker if you ask me?” another cheerleader said, from next to Tina at their lunch table.

Tina turned red with anger. She looked around at the faces of her friends and knew she couldn’t lose face. “Oh he’ll be mine alright. After all, what has that little brainy mouse got compared to what I have.” Tina smiled confidently. “I just haven’t had a chance to persuade him yet.”

She knew how to get what she wanted, and she would do anything to accomplish it. And right now, her eye was on one tall, handsome, mysteriously sexy Max Evans. And nothing was going to stop her.

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