FanFic - Crashdown After Hours
"Losing Control"
Part 1
by James
Disclaimer: I don’t own them I just write about them
Summary: Max can’t stop thinking about Liz and has lost all control.
Category: After Hours
Rating: NC-17
Authors Note: To Bonnie, Linda, and Jennifer you wanted me to write one and here you go. Hope you like it.
It was a clear hot New Mexico night with the air breezing by, teasing people with memories of cooler days. It was midnight and only two people were walking down the silent street. They turned a corner and walking pass the UFO museum then across the street stopping in front of the Crashdown Café when only a year ago a man saved the love of his life.

“Well we're here,” Max looked down at Liz who was looking up at him.

“Yea we are,” she replied. Liz looked around and saw that no one was around then looked at back at Max.

Max ran his hand across her cheek and down her hair, “I’ll see you tomorrow?”

Liz wrapped her hands around Max’s waist, “I don’t want you to leave?” She saw the same responds in his eyes and knew what he was going to say.

“Liz you know I can’t stay. If I stay it will lead to something that you and I aren’t ready for.” Max could see the tears flooding her eyes, “When the time comes Liz you’ll be sorry.” Max teased her.

Liz smiled at him and whipped the tears away, “Promises, promises Max Evans.” Liz pulled Max’s face to her so that she could give his a taste of what he was missing. Liz traced Max’s lips with her tongue until he opened his mouth. Their tongues dueled for a couple of minutes before memorizing each other’s mouths. Max pulled her to him as his grasp on control was vaporizing. The heat radiating from each other could have set a tree on fire.

Max’s hands started to roam Liz’s back pulling her to him more. Liz’s hands searched Max’s chest and slowly roamed their way down below his belt. Liz inched her way down Max’s pants until she found what she had dreamed about feeling ever since their first kiss. Liz touched his arousal carefully as not to ruin the new feeling. Max felt her grab him making him jump back, “I can’t do this Liz.” Max stepped back from Liz and ran down the street.

“I was so close,” a frustrated Liz spoke as she unlocked the Crashdown and walked in.

Max didn’t stop running until he got home and was in his room. He lay on his bed and looked up at the ceiling. “What is wrong with you Evans?” Max closed his eyes and listen to his heart race for a few minutes. It took Max twenty minutes to calm down from what Liz and him did before he ran down the street and home. Max got up from his bed and walked into his bathroom. In the mirror Max starting to think to himself, I want to make love to Liz but I’m just different from her. I have no idea what would happen. Max washed his face and got ready for bed. He jumped into bed and closed his eyes.

Images of Liz started to flash before him. They were images of Liz at the pool party that Isabel and him threw last month. Liz was wearing a black two piece that highlighted all her features. Max had to remember that people where around or he would have taken right there. Max watched Liz in slow motion as she got out of the pool watering trickling down her face and dropping between her breasts, her hair flying everywhere as she shook her face, the way her waist moved as she walked down the side of the pool.

Max put his hands under the sheets and ran them under his boxers. As Max grabbed himself he was amazed that just thinking about Liz got him hard. The images start to flash before him faster causing his hand to stroke himself faster and faster. An image of Liz looking at him knowing that she was all he ever needed, the feel of Liz being close to him, seeing other men give him dagger filled eyes as he walked down the street with her. Max couldn’t take it anymore he threw the covers off him and he grabbed his pants off the floor. Max opened the window, closed it behind him, and he was gone down the road in the jeep.

Liz stood in front of her mirror looking at herself. Is it me? Does he not think I'm pretty?, Liz thought to herself, but those questions where halted when she remembered how he responded to her when they were kissing earlier. Liz smiled at how she could cause that kind of reaction in Max. To have Max Evans loose that much control and having her be the cause of it made her feel invincible.

Liz turned around and walked to her bed but was halted in her tracks when she saw Max climb up the ladder. When Max got up into Liz’s balcony he stopped when he saw Liz standing outside of her window. “Max what are you doing here?” Liz whispered.

Max looked at her and walked, well more like jumped, in front of her and cupped her face in his hands. Max looked her straight in the eyes as he brought his face closer for a kiss. It was as if Liz new what he wanted because her hands were all over him as he deepened the kiss. Their tongues fighting each other like two swords clashing together making Max pull Liz closer to him. Max separated their mouth so that they could take in some air.

Max looked around and some how they managed to climb into Liz bedroom. Max returned his gaze to Liz and saw confusion in her eyes, “What is it Liz?”

“I was just wondering where Mr. Control is? Because what you just did was not him,” Liz smiled at him. She couldn’t hide the smile because she caused him to lose all his control. She did wonder if he was going to stop. Her question was answer as he leaned them both of onto her bed. Liz looked at him and wondered what had caused him to lose all control and have him climb up the ladder tonight.

Max sat up on his knees and started to unbutton his shirt but was stopped by Liz slapping his hands away, “I think that is my job,” She smiled at him. Liz placed a kiss on Max’s warm chest and trailed kisses down him as she unbuttoned the rest of his shirt. Liz’s licked her way up Max’s chest until their lips met. She wanted to taste every inch of him and experience everything that girls had talked about in school. Liz tossed Max’s shirt and ran her hands over his chest and with one finger circled his nipples. Max’s body twitched as she circled her fingers around his body. Max brought his hands between them and ran his hands up to her breasts taking one in each hand. He tightened his grasp on them slowly the released them. He looked down at them then up at Liz who was looking at something she wanted to touch. Max pulled her shirt over her head and looked at the treasure that he uncovered.

He looked at her in amazement and she was all his. This beautiful creature kneeling on the bed before him who wanted the same thing as him was here for him to take. Max leaned her on the bed until she was lying on it. Max met her lips with his as his hands caressed her breasts. Max traded kissing and licking as he made his way down Liz until he sucked one breast into his mouth as he kneaded the other. Liz let out a groan as she experienced this new sensation. Liz ran her hand through Max’s hair but brought him closer to her as he flicked her nipple with his tongue then bit it.

Max continued trailing kisses down her, dipping his tongue into her naval then sucking on it for a while. Liz’s body went into overload as Max’s mouth tasted her body. Max pulled down her shorts she was wearing and was bombarded with the smell that could have only have been her. All rational thought was lost as Max took in a deep breath wanting not to ever forget the smell.

Max traced her thighs before resting on her heat. Liz gave out a little squeak as Max touched her. Max looked up at Liz in surprise and was relieved when she smiled at him. Her eyes telling him to do more she couldn’t get enough of all these sensations. Liz closed her eyes when Max separated her folds and entered two fingers into her. Liz’s body automatically arched into the air as Max slowly withdrew his fingers then entered her again.

A burning heat slowly went from Liz’s feet to her head. Her mind started to swim as Max moved his fingers inside of her. The heat grew hotter inside of her until she felt like she was going to explode and that is what she did. Max watched Liz’s face as a warm liquid washed over his fingers. Her face glowed as he watched her orgasm, which made Max smile because it was he that made her glow. Max withdrew his fingers bringing them up to his mouth. Max tasted his fingers that were incensed with Liz, making Max want more.

Max lowered himself until he was in front of Liz and all her beauty. Max separated her folds with his fingers again and inserted his tongue. As Max tasted Liz he placed his thumb on her nub and started rubbing it. Liz’s hands rammed Max’s face into her making Max flick and taste her faster. Liz wanted to yell at top of lungs in pleasure but nothing was coming out of her mouth. The same heat started to radiate from her body and it was not long before Max was tasting the liquid that he couldn’t get enough of.

Liz pulled Max up to her and kissed him tasting herself with the kiss. Liz turned Max around so that he was lying down on the bed. Liz trailed herself down his neck to his chest and bit one nipple. She smiled as his body reacted the same way as hers did. Liz yanked Max’s pants off with boxers trailing after. She looked at him with awe as he stood at attention in front of her. Liz lowered her face and took him into her mouth twirling her tongue around his shaft making Max clench his eyes shut. The warmth of her mouth around him almost made Max lose himself. Liz looked up at Max as she was devouring him and saw a love that made her feel like a child who was just given a giant candy cane. Liz started to bob her head faster but was stopped when Max pulled her up to him.

Max twirled her around so that she was lying on the bed again and he positioned his body over her. He separated her legs so that he could fit between them. He looked at her and said, “Are you sure?”

“I’ve wanted this since the first time you kissed me. I just don’t want you inside of me I need you inside of me Max.” Liz said as she grabbed his manhood and inserted him into her. Max stopped going any further when he reached the final barrier he looked at Liz to ask for the final yes. She shook her head and Max inserted himself the rest of the way breaking the barrier. Liz winced in pain making Max cover her mouth with his kissing her until she got use to him being in her. Max saw in her eyes the same love and passion that he was surely showing in his own eyes. Max just wanted to stay like this forever, he finally decided after only having to masturbate about it to wanted to make love to Liz.

Max started moving slowing within Liz, but with every groan and sound Liz made he quickened his pace within her. Max could feel himself about to jump over the edge, as if it was instinct he put his hands between them and placed it on her nub so that when he jumped she was going to jump at the same time. Max felt Liz clench her muscles around him making it all he needed to jumped and Max felt Liz jump over the cliff with him. Max lay on the side of her and pulled her to him. Max kissed her forehead as he heard her sigh at the feeling of them together.

A knock came from the door making Liz jumped up from Max’s embrace. “Liz is everything okay in there?” The sound of the doorknob turning could be heard with the question.

“Oh my god it’s my father, Max!” Liz said to him.

The End

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